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These are what the judges have to say:
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ItsMeSBCritique: Overall this was truly one of the most difficult rounds to judge based on the facts that you both built up both of your rounds so well. And you made this final round so epic but I must give me reasons for why I chose who I chose
ItsMeSB This entry was complex and felt like a truly completed story just like reading from a favorite book that you just have to read it over and over again. Even though it was rushed at the end it still felt like characters were portrayed and given rooms to grow. For just watching how Ruby grew in your entry and the twist you gave Cali was a nice touch. But overall it came down what it felt like in my mind was a tiebreaker in choosing but I felt your was just by the skin of your teeth got my vote.
Miss-Sheepy This entry was just an explosion of story and reveals that I was guessing but a lot of the details I missed by a mile. The characters were portrayed and given room to grow as well. Seeing Cali and Leny’s past was just a treat to see and using most of the characters was great. The change in format towards the end still made a good read. But as being a judge I have to make the hard decisions and it only came down to a hair in my judging otherwise it still would be tie in my voting.
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ItsMeSBCritique: I wish we could of have two winners in this tournament because both entries were really good. Sorry to say both the entries felt rushed but it was great to see them finished on time and were given closure to their stories.
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Miss-Sheepy ’s entry, I can clearly understand the story extremely well through her art and later her writing. Her character, Leny or Leonard has gone through much more development, more than Cali. Despite the turning point and climax being a little dated, but otherwise it was pleasant to read.
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ItsMeSB 's entry, I felt like I was reading a book by a professional author. The story was really interesting and the characters really grew on me. The climax got me really hooked to what was going to happen.
ItsMeSB has got my vote by
thiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiis much.
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Miss-SheepyCritique: This last round was very hard to judge since both contestants had equally a powerful and story, even with the missing part. You could tell what both creators where working on for there stories.
With only
Miss-Sheepy being the closed to complete even with the change of format for the ending part
Both contestants had amazing ideas to go with such as the inverted space parts as well the final meetins with Garrow.
For this even with it incomplete
ItsMeSB took this point for having a more better end story but its immersion was limited due to the missing pages
The flow in both stories made them enjoyable to read and both are amazing creators and am glad they worked so hard on the entries
My final choice was
MissSheepy but only by a hair did she get my vote for this, again both amazing artist and writers, it has been an honour to have been one of the many judges for this OCT and to see these two come this far
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ItsMeSBCritique: Will post it up later
Voted for
Miss-SheepyCritique: Will post it up later